Formal letter correction

 Christian Koch

Factory of Happiness ©

815 Boulevard of Broken Dreams

Bikini Bottom 16234, Pacific Ocean

January 13, 2013

Lluïsa Pintó

INS Castelló d'Empúries

Carrer del Rentador, 6  

17486 Castelló d'Empúries, Girona

Dear Mrs Pintó,

I have been asked by my English teacher to tell you my opinion about our school and my suggestions to improve its system.

The first thing that I wanted to spot out is the need of more room and material. You know very well by yourself how the conditions are when we go to the laboratory in chemistry classes. Obviously it is a matter of money, too. But there are things that could already be done. For example the dining room which is one big place we could take more advantage of to redistribute the class assignments and the timetable. I would say the way the money is used should also be overthought. We students cannot know with precision how this matter is managed, but we can see some effects like the big TV screen at the entrance which is, in my opinion, completely useless.

Maybe the next point is an obligation by the government, but I would suggest to take out the physical education classes of 1st of Batxillerat. The subject has no more importance at this level (which is - at least in my opinion - proved by the fact that it is not present in 2nd of Batxillerat) because the students already do physical activities outside the school and the ones who have the intention to do a sports career are in another places now. Also a lot of us are not really happy with the subject because of the teaching of the PE teacher.

And this takes me to another suggestion. The idea to write you a letter to tell you our opinion is great. This should be applied on every teacher so they can try to improve, too. We students are trying to learn more and more and to get more responsible. So why should not some teachers that really do not satisfy the students with their methods try to change something, too?

I hope you take into consideration our opinion and you think about them.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
Christian Koch.

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